Poppy Day.
Remembrance Day
The eleventh day of the eleventh month.
When the first big war of the twentieth century ended.
This is for Edward Russell (Ted) Bates who died in battle in France on 1st June, 1918, aged 30. My Great Uncle.
It is also for my parents who both took part in WW2 and for Colin, a cousin and Jeff, a friend who both did the Vietnam thing. And for Graham, who left both legs in Vietnam and returned to enter Parliament to help make a difference. Matthew Locke and David Pearce are also remembered.
And for all those others who either died or had something inside them die in the service of Australia.
Especially for those currently in Iraq, Afghanistan, East Timor, The Solomon Islands and the other trouble spots where Australian troops are helping.
For returning home is not the end of war.

Mum and Dad and Denny saw the passing out parade at Puckapunyal
(It was a long march from cadets).
The sixth battalion was the next to tour and it was me who drew the card.
We did Canungra and Shoalwater before we left.
And Townsville lined the footpath as we marched down to the quay.
This clipping from the paper shows us young and strong and clean.
And there’s me in my slouch hat with my SLR and greens.
God help me, I was only nineteen.
From Vung Tau riding Chinooks to the dust at Nui Dat,
I’d been in and out of choppers now for months.
But we made our tents a home. VB and pinups on the lockers,
And an Asian orange sunset through the scrub.
And can you tell me, doctor, why I still can’t get to sleep?
And night time’s just a jungle dark and a barking M-16?
And what’s this rash that comes and goes, can you tell me what it means?
God help me, I was only nineteen.
A four week operation, when each step can mean your last one
On two legs: it was a war within yourself.
But you wouldn’t let your mates down ’til they had you dusted off,
So you closed your eyes and thought about something else.
Then someone yelled out “Contact”, and the bloke behind me swore.
We hooked in there for hours, then a God almighty roar.
Frankie kicked a mine the day that mankind kicked the moon.
God help me, he was going home in June.
And I can still see Frankie, drinking tinnies in the Grand Hotel
On a thirty-six hour rec leave in Vung Tau.
And I can still hear Frankie, lying screaming in the jungle.
‘Till the morphine came and killed the bloody row.
And the Anzac legends didn’t mention mud and blood and tears.
And stories that my father told me never seemed quite real
I caught some pieces In my back that I didn’t even feel.
God help me, I was only nineteen.
And can you tell me, doctor, why I still can’t get to sleep?
And why the Channel Seven chopper chills me to my feet?
And what’s this rash that comes and goes, can you tell me what it means?
God help me, I was only nineteen.
The song as sung by the Australian Band, “Redgum” -The MP3 is 633.03Kb and plays for 3:55 minutes – ©Copyright Date Unknown by John Schuman
For those who are missing the Aussie slang and references.
- Puckapunyal, Conungra, Shoalwater: Australian Army training bases
- Townsville: City in Queensland and major Army Barracks
- SLR: 7.62mm Self Loading Rifle – standard Army weapon of the era
- greens: Jungle green uniform
- VB: Victoria Bitter – an Australian brand of beer
- tinnies: Cans of beer
- rec leave: recreation leave
- Anzac: Australian and New Zealand Army Corps
- Channel Seven: An Australian Television Network
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We’ll remember together, shall we? On opposite sides of the world, with slightly different music, but looking back with the same respectful gratitude. For all those who died “or had something inside them die,” as you so movingly put it… Thank you for this.
Lest We Forget. Moving tribute, Archie … thank you.
Jen, thank you.
Buff, No thanks to me, thanks instead to all who served.
yes Archie my family suffered a great loss in the war too…

loved your aussie slang interpretations
I would love to put one of your poems on my poetry site at …..
http://poeartica.blogspot.com/
if that is ok with you….
thanks for adding laketrees to your blogroll …I will reciprocate
have a great evening !
I love that version of the redgum song.
archie, on one of my trips to vietnam I made friends with a wonderfully kind and generous man who had served with the vietcong army. he was one of the guys who ‘won’.
I asked him if he had been wounded in the American War (as they called it) and he pulled up his shirt to show me the scars. when I asked how old he had been he said
“I was 19″
that song has an even deeper layer of meaning for me now
Hiya, Kim, thank you for visiting. I think all our families have had wartime tragedies. So sad in a young nation as so few were in battles to protect our country.
Those slang interpretations were a part of the text when I found the words to the Redgum song, so they are not my fault
As for the poetry, this site is published under a CC non-commercial license – feel free to use anything here with just a little link
Oh, not yet on the poetry page is my latest attempt at vers libre.
Much of my poetic endeavour recently have been in the voice of a small cockroach named “archie” – I have given him a page of his own where he can muse in peace.
nursemyra, Thank you for this comment. It personalises a part of my remembrance.
While I don’t make a big thing of it because it can be so easily misunderstood, I also think of the young people on both sides of all these conflicts. They are all unique human beings, they each will suffer physical or emotional pain and they each have a mother who may well have to mourn.
“Why” is the question I keep asking myself.
Nice post, Archie. And some good comments too.
Thanks for this, Archie; and thanks NurseMyra for your comment. If only we all did a lot more of this “seeing things from the other side”… *before* conflicts start.
Mrs Fitz & I were fortunate to be at the Australian War Memorial in Villers-Brettoneux just over a week ago. Very moving.
see http://mike.brisgeek.com/2007/11/08/fitzies-in-france/
I didn’t miss the irony of driving there in a German vehicle.
az, thanks for that. I seem to have some thoughtful readers.
Mike, I agree. If only. How many conflicts look stupid and pointless after fifty years or so!
The Australian War Memorials in Europe seem to be inspiring places
haha Archie

“small cockroach”….
I like that
will check out your “vers libre” and get back to you
have a great Monday….
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laketrees, I think you grabbed the wrong post, but no worries. That small cockroach has been around since the 1920′s